Basicly general depth isn't that bad, as a matter of fact it looks lovely on the left side of photo, for example. I just forgot to say about SPEFICIC area on the upper left part of red ball (this one in the shadow), where the transition is most visible. For me, it's too much agressive. I would like to see the change of sharpness on the loger distance. What about the ring: the sharpness transition I mentioned lines up with the lightning. The blur increases in the point where the light turns into the shadow, what doesn't look esthetic and is just a fault in the outcome.
However, I enjoy this deviation very much. I'll also keep my eye on you, your deviations are amazing